Friday, November 9, 2018

22A Elevator Pitch 3



Good afternoon,
I’m glad you joined me for another look at Redi Travel.
For this meeting I would like you to feel the way my product can change you
this will be introducing what our product can potentially do for our customers.
I want you to take a moment and imagine forgetting something, like you forgot to close your front door, or lock your car door, or close your hamster cage… take that moment now and really try to feel those emotions. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10.
Now I want you to imagine having the ability to control that emotion and have closure that you closed the hamsters cage, locked your door, and closed the front door.
I once was controlled by my inhaler as an asthmatic
I remember that the feeling of not having my inhaler, that alone caused anxiety and triggered an asthma attack.
I want to give a level of security to diabetics where they never feel this anxiety and can travel without bad thoughts on the back of their mind.
Redi Travel’s canister will be targeting our outdoorsman or clients that simply want to do more and have a secure guaranteed level of safety.
Our product will feature next generation technology offering the best preservation and indestructability among competitors.  
Thank you.

Looking back on my feedback I did not get any. But as I am going through the videos I am treating each interaction like it’s my follow up appointments.
I changed this pitch to be like my final speech and if an investor does not bite from this than it is over.

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